Pied Beauty: your own poem

 

Look at Hopkins poem closely and note the use of language features (alliteration, simile, metaphors, imageries, and rhyme). Produce your own version of the poem and take these into account. 

Hopkin’s poem deals with ‘dappled things’, yours can be on one of the folllowing: 

 

Yummy things

 

Scary things

 

 Musical things

 

Technological things

 

Scientific things

 

Living things

 

Pretty things

 

Floral things

 

Tasty things

 

Fruity things

 

Feminine things

 

Simple things

 

Masculine things

 

Aussie things

 

Aquatic things

 

Sporty things

 

School things

 

Glamrous things

 

 

 

Glory be to God for ———————– things

 

For ————— of ———————as a ————————–;

 

For ——————– all in stipple upon —————————;

 

——————————————; ————————————;

 

————– and ______ ­­­- _______, _________ and __________ .

 

All things _________ , ________. ___________, __________ ;

 

Whatever is ____________, ____________ (who knows how?)

 

With ______, ___________; _______, _____; _________, _____;

 

He fathers-forth whose ____________ is past change: Praise Him

 

 

 

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14 Responses to Pied Beauty: your own poem

  1. mararipoll says:

    Glory be to God for Yummy things

    For Milka chocolates of hazelnuts as a dessert;

    For Freddo´s ice – cream all in stipple upon a cone;

    caramel; or plain chocolate;

    for McDonald’s and Burger King ­­­- french fries, coke and burger.

    All things count, cold food, hot food.

    Whatever is big, small (who knows how?)

    With chocolate chips, candy, cream, caramel;

    He fathers-forth whose eating is past change: Praise Him

    Mara Ripoll.

  2. Bauti Olaizola and Nico Monguzzi says:

    Technological things- Masculine things-Sporty things

    Glory be to God for technological things
    For iPod’s of fifth generation as a very modern thing;
    For play stations all in Sony shops stipple upon the shopping centers;
    For naps on Sundays afternoon; then football matches;
    For Argentina and Brazil; Messi, Neymar and Thiago Silva.
    All things Football, Hockey, Basket and Tennis;
    Whatever is Boca, River (who knows how?)
    With Real Madrid, Barcelona; Sony, Apple; Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo;
    He fathers-forth whose entertainment is past change: Praise Him

  3. Flor Araya and Luz Garcia Fernandez says:

    Glory be to God for yummy things

    For chocolate of Hersey’s as starbursts;

    For toddy’s all in stipple upon chocolate chips;

    All things cake, twix, kit kat, trident;

    Whatever is sweet, salty (who knows how?)

    With sugar, cream; melted chocolate, nutella; artificial flavours, dulce de leche;

    He fathers-forth whose flavour is past change: Praise Him

  4. Rocio Hartmann & Jose Catani says:

    Glory be to God for YUMMY things

    For COTTON CANDY of RASPBERRY as a FLUFFY CLOUD;

    For PANCAKES all in stipple upon MAPLE SYRUP;

    SWEET COLORFUL CUPCAKES; WARM SOFT BLUEBERRY MUFFINS;

    CHOCOLATE and CHERRY COKE ­­­- CHOCOLATE MILK, MILKSHAKES and FRUITY SMOOTHIES .

    All things COLORFUL , SWEET. FLUFFY, DECORATIVE ;

    Whatever is CHEWY, FRESH (who knows how?)

    With CHOCOLATE CHIPS, SKITTLES; M&M´S, KIT KATS; LOLIPOPS, RECSEES;

    He fathers-forth whose DELICIOUSNESS is past change: Praise Him

  5. Luli Giambruni, Delfi Miy Uranga says:

    Glory be to God for sporty things

    For giving us our body full of muscles as Maravilla Martinez;

    For the spirit and hope all in stipple upon our blood;

    Football; hockey; rugby; swimming; golf;

    In clubs, schools and competitions­­­-running, swimming and jumping .

    All things counter, physically, mentally;

    Whatever is teamwork, individual (who knows how?)

    With, athletics; lazy, anger; preasure, amateur; challenger;

    He fathers-forth whose experience is past change: Praise Him

  6. tomas borda says:

    Pied Beauty
    Glory be to God for Living things things
    For School things
    of Sporty things
    as a Technological things;

    For Simple things
    all in stipple upon Glamrous things
    Aussie things
    Simple things

    Pretty things
    and Floral things
    Scientific things
    , Masculine things
    and Simple things.

    All things Glorial things ,spectacular things .fun things , familiar things;

    Whatever is beautiful things , mystery things (who knows how?)

    With yummy things ,scary things; candy things ,saur things ;liquid things ,solid things;

    He fathers-forth whose candies are past change: Praise Him

  7. Glory be to God for yummy things

    For cupcakes of chocolate as a mountain;

    For ice-creams all in stipple upon the glass;

    chocolate; or strawberry;

    banana split and nutela dessert ­­­- pancakes, cakes and waffles .

    All things count. The cold ones, the warm ones, the middle ones ;

    Whatever is circled, squared (who knows how?)

    With chocolate chips, colourful chips; strawberries, blueberries; cirup, honey;

    He fathers-forth whose desserts is past change: Praise Him

    A COLLAGE WE MADE: http://lunaperezmuniz.cumbresblogs.com/files/2013/05/PicMonkey-Collage.jpg

  8. Catalina Rela y Francisco Mosquera says:

    Glory be to God for fattening things

    For the ribs of kansas as a tasty dish;

    For ice-cream all in stipple upon sprinkles;

    Bacon pizza; White fudge oreos;

    Waffles and ice ¬¬¬- cream, chocolate and brownies.

    All things salty , sweet. Bittersweet , bitter ;

    Whatever is creamy , juicy (who knows how?)

    With lettuce, chips ; water , coke ;eggs , cucumber ;

    He fathers-forth whose food is past change: Praise Him

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